Editing #10 - Considering The Third Draft

After receiving feedback on the second draft that I had submitted earlier on, this feedback is relevant to my most recent Draft #3, as these are areas which I had not changed.

However, the only piece of feedback that no longer applies is the attention given to the problem of aspect ratios, which I have now resolved. 

This is the feedback I recieved:

• The shot of the band (2:02), slightly goes against the rule of 180 degrees. However it is not a big problem, I will attempt to flip this footage or maybe consider replacing it with something else.

• Some of the shots of the band packing up at 2:37 are slightly dark. I will therefore lighten these by enhancing the exposure. 

• It was also suggested that it might be better to remove the shots of the lead singer in reverse (during the reverse sequence). However this was a personal preference and therefore isn't a big factor to consider. After looking over the footage more, I may choose to remove this as it would not harm the rest of the footage. I would simply be losing perhaps 5 seconds in total? This would run over to the pub scene, with the soundtrack diminuendoing.