Exporting Draft #2

In this second draft I have amended some of the things I had discussed for my first draft. This is now the full length of the video and it has therefore given me a chance to break it down into different sections to analyse.

In my final I will included the following:

• The director's title which I have previously discussed in multiple posts. This will appear at the very end of the video after we see the band enter a pub at the end of their day.

• More of a distinction between the use of aspect ratios. Throughout my video two different ratios are used in order to give the scenes the required space (i.e. avoid faces being cut off, etc).
  I have decided I therefore have 4 options:
  a) Use one ratio the whole way through.
  b) Avoid using the 'letterbox' effect altogether.
  c) Discover how I can position the footage inside the clips so that a 2.35:1 ratio can be used the whole way through (most desired outcome).
  d) Make a distinction between Performance and Narrative sections, therefore different ratios for each.

• More consideration to some parts of colour-correction. For example, I would like to explore Light Leak packs more, as I understand there are Organic packs which are particularly effective.

• I would also like to work on my 'Still Here' title and possibly the 'Viva Brother' one also; Whether this will be with kinetic typography or various other devices/features I have discovered in programs such as Motion 5. 

I will now gather further audience feedback so that I can completely maximize the potential of the video and possibly learn something from my peers/audience. As part of this, I will be filming the reactions of my audience watching this second draft.